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terry connelly
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    I am enjoying the color palette and feeling of rust I get from this work. My assumption is that this is a train station somewhere. The first ? that comes to mind is why are the lower bars broken? The three areas that vie for my attention are the window and color there, the bars, and the lettering. It feels to me that each of those could be their own photo but together they don’t quite mesh for me. I am also thrown off by the angle of the lines top and bottom because of the movement I perceive on the train ? appears linear

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